请问这句话有语法错误吗?如下：KindlyremindduetoA’sPOareonhold,but21ctnsdesksthatfromYangjiangarestillinourwarehouse,plskindlyadvisehowshouldwedo?thankyou.我想表达的是：善意的提醒你们由于A公司

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请问这句话有语法错误吗?如下：
Kindly remind due to A’s PO are on hold,but 21ctns desks that from Yangjiang are still in our warehouse,pls kindly advise how should we do?thank you.
我想表达的是：善意的提醒你们由于A公司的订单暂停了,但是我们仓库还有21箱来自阳江的桌子,请问这些我们该怎么处理呢

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有一点点问题
Kindly remind that since A’s PO are on hold,21ctns desks from Yangjiang are still in our warehouse,pls kindly advise how should we do?thank you.
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I'd like to remind that since A’s PO is on hold,the 21 ctns desks from Yangjiang are still in our warehouse.pls kindly inform us how should we deal with them?thank you.
(A公司的订单是取消了么?若是取消就直接说cancel 吧)