请各位高手帮我看看英文简历是否需要修改WorkExperience:Apr.2007-Mar.2008NanjingSpeedNetworkResponsibilities-Routers（Router-OSandISA）,switches,Server(IISandExchange)andnetworkhardwareConfigurationandmaintenance-Gene

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请各位高手帮我看看英文简历是否需要修改
Work Experience:
Apr.2007-Mar.2008 Nanjing Speed Network
Responsibilities
-Routers（Router-OS and ISA）,switches,Server(IIS and Exchange) and network hardware Configuration and maintenance
-General LAN-building and Administration
-Virus protection and prevent attacks
-Negotiate with vendors,quote and order equipment
-Data backup and recovery
Sep.2006-Mar.2007 Changzhou City administrative centre
Responsibilities
-Monitoring equipments and telephone exchange maintenance
-General LAN Administration
-Pictures design on bulletin board
Education:
Sep.2004-Jun.2007 Nanjing College of Information Technology （Network management）
Apr.2006-Sep.2006 Nanjing Xinhua Computer Institute（Graphic Design）
Professional grade certificate:
Ruijie Certified Network Associate
national computer examination rank 2
College english test level 3
Adobe China Certified Designer
Self-evaluation:
Passionate,confident,full of patience.
I work well in an team environment or by myself and excel in a fast paced,has the intense dedication to work and the professional spirit.

Answer 1

建议：
1.将你的受教育的背景的位置放得更靠前一些.
2.注意一些大小写的统一
3.self-evaluation 可以改为 personality
all above are personal opinions that may not so proper in your case,if so,absord,if not,just to be taken as suggestions