帮我看一下有没有语法错误,英语Goodafternooneverybody.Asweknow,therearemanykindoffoodsintheworld.Indortodescribeeasily,Idivethemintotwoparts,easternfoodsandwesternfoods.Letusstartwiththeeasternfoods.Ithink

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帮我看一下有没有语法错误,英语
Good afternoon everybody.As we know,there are many kind of foods in the world.Indor to describe easily,I dive them in to two parts,eastern foods and western foods.Let us start with the eastern foods.I think chinese foods can be on behalf of eastern foods.Do not you feel hungry when you see the dilous chinese foods?Our chinese has traditional culture,which contains traditional food.Zongzi is a typical traditionalfood,which is made of rice and meat and anything you can image.Next to western foods,I choose the america as the deputy.Amercians are interested in fast foods such as hamburgs and fresh fries for their fast life style.These foods can help them save as mach time as possible and give them more energy.Amercians do not have many skills for cooking liks chinese.By the way,They are good at making chocolate and cakes.That is the reason why most americians are so fat.On the contrary,chineses pay more attention to how much nutrition the foods have.Finally,I show you two pictures,which person do you prefer.帮我看看有什么语法错误,或者哪些句子怎样写更漂亮

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第一行 many kinds of in order to
第二行 dive 改为divide 第四行 dilous 改为delicious
第五行 image 改为imagine
第六行America 改为American 第七行 Mach 改为 much
第八行 liks 改为 like
最后一行 which picture