帮我看看有没什么语法方面需要修改的地方Iamverygladintroducemyselftoyou,mydetailasfollow:IgraduatedfromXHuniversityin2003,mymajoristheelectronicandinformationengineering.Afermygraduation,IworkedintheCL

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帮我看看有没什么语法方面需要修改的地方
I am very glad introduce myself to you,my detail as follow:
I graduated from XH university in 2003,my major is the electronic and information engineering.Afer my graduation,I worked in the CL group,a famous consume elecronic company,its
main products are the air conditioner,washing machine,truck and so on.During working in the CL group ,I have been engaged in the designing of elcctronic circuit.
Half an year later,I left CL group and joined in DT electronic company, During the half and two years,I have been responsible for the application and the test and the technical support about PL products,so,I am famillar with the DT's PL products very much,I also can program using other canpany's PL products alone,Such as MitsubishiP, AB PL,Siemens PL,Omorn PL and so so on.Otherwise,I Not only am familar with PL,but also am familar with other industrial products,such as AMD,HMI,ASD,TD.
Finally ,I talk about my charater simply,my charater is as follow:
I am a honest ,self-confident,diligent ,Self motivated, excellent communication skill person.

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I am very glad to introduce myself,my detail are as follow:
my major is electronic and information engineering
its main products are air conditioners,washing machines,trucks and the like.
During this two and a half year
i can also program using other
Finally ,I'll simply talk about my character
my characters are as follow