看看这段话有没有语法错误EverybodycanfindstuffwhichisownnecessaryinTradeMe.Suchasfoods,clothes,bags,cars,etc.Buyersandsellerscantalktoeachotherwhentheyaretradingsomethings.Throughthetrading,mayletpeople

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看看这段话有没有语法错误
Everybody can find stuff which is own necessary in Trade Me. Such as foods, clothes, bags, cars, etc. Buyers and sellers can talk to each other when they are trading some things. Through the trading, may let people exchange the view, to express the feelings, the exchange suggestion, and the sharing information mutually. So Trade Me is not only a business, but also into many new friends.

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有些用词不是特别好.如buyer可以换成customer这样比较贴切.还有就是标点符号有点不太清楚.如：Through the trading,may let people exchange the view这里要么去掉逗号,要么添加一个主语...还有to express the feelings,the exchange suggestion,and the sharing information mutually.这里,最好把and前面的逗号去掉吧...最后就是but also into many new friends.这一句,意思有点不太懂啊,请你的意思是不是说交到很多新朋友啊?如果是那就可以改成but also make many new friends 就行了
我是自己改的,可能有错,我的年龄也不大,但也尽心尽力了,最后说一句：!