中译英,请指正“John将会在一个月内接任我现在的工作,以后请将联系我的邮件一并抄送给他.”我自己的回答“Johnwillbemyreplacementwithinonemonth,sopleaseCCtheemailstohimfromnowon”请高手帮我

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中译英,请指正
“John将会在一个月内接任我现在的工作,以后请将联系我的邮件一并抄送给他.”
我自己的回答“John will be my replacement within one month,so please CC the emails to him from now on”
请高手帮我看看我的回答有哪些地方不到位的,或者有语法错误的,最好就是能告诉我怎么翻译最好.

Answer 1

接替某人的工作最好用take over
Jone will take over my work in a month.If there are any emails to me,please also CC to him.
你翻译的后半句没有说明把哪些邮件抄送给他.