请问一个英语语法表达问题?ThispaperproposesaPDFdocumentwatermarkembeddingmethod,forthePDFtextwatermarkmethodwhichhaslowwatermarkcapacityandpoorrobustnessandsoon.ItwillmakePDFdocumentintoimagefiles,andthen

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请问一个英语语法表达问题?
This paper proposes a PDF document watermark embedding method, for the PDF text watermark method which has low watermark capacity and poor robustness and so on. It will make PDF document into image files, and then add watermark information in it. According to the experiment, the method improves the capacity of the watermark, so the intact copyright information can be embedded in the PDF document. And the document storage and reading will not be affected.
请问上面这段话,哪里有语法错误?非常感谢了!

Answer 1

第一行embedding应改为 过去分词 embedded 原句=.watermark- embedded method,
第二行去掉which for是并列连词 后面是并列句
第三行 in it改为to it
第四行 the intact copyright information去掉the
第五行 reading改为being read
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