帮我的英文日记改改错大小写就忽略不计把,Today,Iwenttotiantanparkwithmyparents.wesawlotsofpalaces,theyweregreat.whenwewantedtohavearest,aforeignercameandaskmetotakeheraphoto(请我帮她拍一张照片

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帮我的英文日记改改错
大小写就忽略不计把,
Today,I went to tiantan park with my parents .we saw lots of palaces,they were great.when we wanted to have a rest,a foreigner came and ask me to take her a photo(请我帮她拍一张照片）.I did it ,she thanked me.I was very exciting and said"you are wellcome!"I was so happy because it was I first speak with a foreigner.

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a foreigner came and ask me to take her a photo
: a foreigner came and asked me to help her take a photo
I was very exciting
: I was very excited
I was so happy because it was I first speak with a foreigner
: It was my first time to speak with a foreigner, I was so happy.
不要用那么多的从句,尽量先用简单平实的语言把事情说清楚.