下面这篇文章要作为小学3年级演讲作文要怎么修改Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily.Inameit“Happyfamily”,becauseeveryoneinmyfamilyishappy.Comeandmeetmyfamily,please!MymothernameisCuiLingling.Iloveher,andsh

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下面这篇文章要作为小学3年级演讲作文 要怎么修改
There are four people in my family.
I name it “Happy family”,because everyone in my family is happy.
Come and meet my family,please!
My mother name is Cui Lingling.
I love her,and she loves me,too.
My mother is very beautiful.
She likes beautiful clothes.
And she often buy new clothes to me .
My father is a cooker.
He is tall and fat.
My father can cook very delicious.
Becauous my father I can eat many delicious foods.
I have a lovely little brother .
Now my little brother can not speaking.
At day my father work ,my mother look me little brother at home.
I go to school at day.
At night,we often play ,watch TV together!
We are happy every day!I love my family.
That's all,thank you!
Good morning everyone,My name is Bao xingya.
Today I speak my family.
Everyone has a family.
I have a family,too.这是最前面的

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My mother name is Cui Lingling------My mother's name is Cui Lingling
And she often buy new clothes to me .------And she often buys new clothes for me.
My father can cook very delicious.------My father can cook very delicious foods.
Becauous my father I can eat many delicious foods.------Because of my father,I can eat many delicious foods.
Now my little brother can not speaking.------Now my little brother can not speak.
At day my father work ,my mother look me little brother at home.-----At days that my father works ,my mother looks my little brother at home.
I go to school at day.------I go to school in the daytime.
At night,we often play ,watch TV together!------At night,we often play and watch TV together!
Today I speak my family.-------today I want to talk about my family