帮我改一改这一份英文自我介绍（急）Hello,everyone,itisreallyagreathonortohavethisopportunityforainterview.MynameisXX.YuinChinesemeanssunshineandbright,soBrightismyEnglishname.WhenIwas17yearsold,Ibega

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帮我改一改这一份英文自我介绍（急）
Hello ,everyone,it is really a great honor to have this opportunity for a interview .My name is X X.Yu in Chinese means sunshine and bright,so Bright is my English name.
When I was 17 years old,I began to be an English teacher.Two years ago ,a student of mine told me that I had taught her mother before,suddenly I acknowledged that I am no longer young.
Being a primary English teacher ,I like to play games with my children ,sing or chant with them ,when they have difficulties,I’d like to be a helper ,in my class,I try to be their good friend ,not only their teacher,I have patience on all of the children,many children like to have my English lessons,a former student went to see me ,she said I hadn’t changed a lot during the years,I know the reason is that being with the students,I always have a young heart,I may say in all sincerity that Ilove my students so much.

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Hello ,everyone,it is really a great honor to have this opportunity for this interview .My name is X X.Yu which means sunshine and bright in Chinese.therefore i choose Bright as my English name.
When I was 17 years old,I began to have my lifelong career as an english teacher.Two years ago ,a student of mine told me that I had taught her mother many years ago,suddenly I was aware of amazing fact that I am no longer young.
Being a primary English teacher ,I like to play games with my children ,sing and chant with them ,when they have difficulties,I’d like to be a helper .In my class,I try to be their good friend ,instead of their teacher.I have patience on all of the children,many children like to have my English lessons.a former student went to see me and said that I hadn’t changed a lot during these years.For being with the students,I always have a young heart,I may say in all sincerity that I love my students so much.
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