英语翻译请帮我修正以下句子文法附上中文好让你们了解我想表达什麼wheniregisterthisnewsemesterFall2013,ipayregisterfeeonline.but,idon'tknowwhy,ihavepaidtwice$30dollars,forsure.irememberwhenipayth

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英语翻译
请帮我修正以下句子文法 附上中文 好让你们了解我想表达什麼
when i register this new semester Fall 2013 ,
i pay register fee online.but,i don't know why,
i have paid twice $30 dollars,for sure.
i remember when i pay the registeer fee is in the
forms of Dawson.the second time i pay the money was on my portal.
it's say something about balance fees!it's say $30 also.
is it possible to ask my money back?i pay the total $60,
i want my $30 back.
thanks for your understanding.
当我报名新学期2013的课程时
我线上缴注册费 但我不知道为什麼
我竟然付了两次$30 信用卡有刷了两次$30的纪录
我清楚的记得我是填完Dawson的报名表 後面付的
但第二次付则是在我的portal上 因为出现alance fees的讯息 一样是缴$30
所以我缴了
有没有可能把我多缴的钱 要回来?我总共付了$60
我想要我的$30 要回来

Answer 1

在您原文的基础上修改如下,不明白可继续提问：
When I registered this new semester in Fall 2013,I have paid the register fee online,but I don't know why I have paid $30 dollars twice.I remembered clearly that I paid the register fee right after I filled out the forms of Dawson,but the second time I paid the money was on my portal,as it said something about balance fees,which is also $30,and I paid it,too!
I wonder is it possible to get my extra-paid money back?Since I have paid $60 in total,I would like to get a refund of the $30.
Thanks for your understanding.
extra-paid - 多付的
refund - 退款
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