看看这有没有语法错误Hello,everyone!Tomorrowmorningat8o'clock.Wewillvisitthezoo.Pleaseonfootgettoschooldoor.Invisit,pleasecarefullistenandsee.Writedowntheinterestingthings.NextMondayturnedovertoareport.Atthezo

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Hello,everyone!Tomorrow morning at 8 o'clock.We will visit the zoo.Please on foot get to school door.In visit,please careful listen and see.Write down the interesting things.Next Monday turned over to a report.At the zoo,please don't make much noise.Take pen and notebook.Thank you!

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We will visit the zoo at 8 o'clock tomorrow morning.Please bring your pen and notebook to school on foot.Please listen and see carefully.Don't make much noise at the zoo.
Write down the interesting things.And hand in a report next Monday.Thank you!