这段话呢!有没有语法上的错误?Afterwatchingthefilm,theharvestistobe"apersonlivinginthisworld,sometimesfortheirownsakeisnotalive,butfortheirownlivesandthosearoundus,itistheresponsibilityofeveryonebearsresp

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这段话呢!有没有语法上的错误?
After watching the film,the harvest is to be "a person living in this world,sometimes for their own sake is not alive,but for their own lives and those around us,it is the responsibility of everyone bears responsibility because it came This world "so we decided to do anything you have to take into consideration the feelings of people around,Don't be too strongly independent.

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第一句的watching就用错了,此处应用seeing
sometimes for their own sake is not alive,but for their own lives and those around us这两句间的逗号应改为句号.
哎,越看越乱,后面的句子一塌糊涂……