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哪位朋友能帮我批改一下这个雅思作文,我自己写的,第一次尝试,是剑桥4text4的小作文,ThefirstlinegraphtellsusthevisitabroadbyUKresidentsandvisitstotheUKbyoverseasresidents.Thesecondbarchatillustrates
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哪位朋友能帮我批改一下这个雅思作文,我自己写的,第一次尝试,是剑桥4text4的小作文,
The first line graph tells us the visit abroad by UK residents and visits to the UK by overseas residents.The second bar chat illustrates the most popular countries visited by UK resident 1999.
From the first graph,the visits abroad by UK residents form 12 millions 1979,to 52 millions 1999.During 2 decades ,the addition was 40 millions.But the visits to the UK by overseas residents from 10 millions 1979 to 27 millions 1999,approximate 17 millions additions during past 20 years.
Evidently ,in the bar chat ,the most popular country by UK residents 1999 is France,almost 11 millions of tUK visitors chosen it.Second s Spain,about 9.5 millions visitors chosen it.The 3rd to 5th is the USA,Greece and Turkey.
It is noticeable that with the growing of UK resident,the countries which around the British will be the most benefical countries
The first line graph tells us the visit abroad by UK residents and visits to the UK by overseas residents.The second bar chat illustrates the most popular countries visited by UK resident 1999.
From the first graph,the visits abroad by UK residents form 12 millions 1979,to 52 millions 1999.During 2 decades ,the addition was 40 millions.But the visits to the UK by overseas residents from 10 millions 1979 to 27 millions 1999,approximate 17 millions additions during past 20 years.
Evidently ,in the bar chat ,the most popular country by UK residents 1999 is France,almost 11 millions of tUK visitors chosen it.Second s Spain,about 9.5 millions visitors chosen it.The 3rd to 5th is the USA,Greece and Turkey.
It is noticeable that with the growing of UK resident,the countries which around the British will be the most benefical countries
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你可以去搜“新东方批改网”,这个是提供专业批改服务~反正页面很精美,价格也……唉,如果不是打折期去批改的话,就心痛死人了……不过毕竟是外教,质量很不错,如果你基础不太好,语法错误比较多,那就找这里批改.但是你在网上和这些外教交流提问的时候也得用英文,憋死我了T T 他们有三个级别的批改标准,楼主斟酌吧~
最后祝楼主好运!
最后祝楼主好运!
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