小朋友自己写的作文,帮我看一下有没有错误,..作文题目为MypenLookatthepen,Itislongandbeautiful,Thereisalittlerabbit,Itisonthepen,Thepenispink,Ilikevsingitverymuch.

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小朋友自己写的作文,帮我看一下有没有错误,..作文题目为My pen
Look at the pen,It is long and beautiful,There is a little rabbit ,It is on the pen ,The pen is pink ,I like vsing it very much.

Answer 1

基本上没有问题,照下修改可能更顺一些：
Look at the pen,It is pink,long and beautiful.There is a little rabbit on the pen .I like it very much.
有一个单词错误,误：vsing 正：using