帮我改一封给美国教授的英语信件,谁改的多,dearDr.××:Iam××from××university,andprofessor××youknowismytutor.didyouhaveagoodtimewithusinBeijinginsummerthisyear?IthoughtIgotmanyconstructivesuggestion

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帮我改一封给美国教授的英语信件,谁改的多,
dear Dr.××:
I am ×× from ×× university,and professor ×× you know is my tutor.did
you have a good time with us in Beijing in summer this year?
I thought I got many constructive suggestions about studying aboard from
you,and thank you very much.
one of my classmates,named ** ,and I have prepared a paper titled
"",and professor *** has dominate
you as a reviewer.if you recieve the paper
,we will appreciate you for your review.that will be the best instructions
for me.
Besides,I have another important thing need your help.Next year,i will
got my master degree.I am ready for continuing my researchwork and wanna attend
to some doctoral program.I think you might have got well known with many professor
,would you please do me a favor and recommend me to some tutor or team in USA or other
country?thank you

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dear Dr.××:通篇要注意大小写!I am ×× from ×× university,and professor ×× you know is my tutor.you know作为插入语要有逗号隔开did you have a good time with us in Beijing in summer this year?in su...