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英语作文比赛DearTom:Hello,IamDiane,Iamaverysympathetictoyoursituation,IseeyouarealwaysplayingtricksonJack,whydon'tyoulearnwhat?Findawaytodealwithit?Asisthegoodfriend'scat,forhumanbeingstoexterminateratscat
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Dear Tom:
Hello,I am Diane,I am a very sympathetic to your situation,I see you are always playing tricks on Jack,why don't you learn what?Find a way to deal with it?As is the good friend's cat,for human beings to exterminate rats cat!How can you be so stupid!Aren't you afraid of snakes,owls to replace your position?When the time comes,you can not enjoy such a life,and you have to refuel!
-- Diane
有什么要改正的吗?有语法错误吗?
Dear Tom:
Hello,I am Diane,I am a very sympathetic to your situation,I see you are always playing tricks on Jack,why don't you learn what?Find a way to deal with it?As is the good friend's cat,for human beings to exterminate rats cat!How can you be so stupid!Aren't you afraid of snakes,owls to replace your position?When the time comes,you can not enjoy such a life,and you have to refuel!
-- Diane
有什么要改正的吗?有语法错误吗?
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是信的格式的话,之前就不要hello 了.tom后面是逗号,外国人的习惯,不要用中国人的习惯去加冒号.
Dear Tom,
I am very sympathetic to your situation,去掉a.
I see you always playing tricks on Jack.去掉are,see sb.doing sth.
之后一句话,我不知道你要表达什么.你是想说,为什么你不吸取教训?why don't you learnt that?不能用what.
Find a way to treat it better.因为是讲猫,感觉用treat比较好.
As it is ,你缺了个主语.然后你想说,它是人类的好朋友呢,还是tom朋友的猫?这句不通.
之后可以说,Cats can catch rats for us.
how can you be so stupid,可以是可以,就是感觉语气重了点.
之后一句,又不是很通,你是想说,“你怕蛇吗,如果是老鹰的话,你会怎么做?
最后一句,你是想说,你会后悔吗?you will regret就可以了.
Dear Tom,
I am very sympathetic to your situation,去掉a.
I see you always playing tricks on Jack.去掉are,see sb.doing sth.
之后一句话,我不知道你要表达什么.你是想说,为什么你不吸取教训?why don't you learnt that?不能用what.
Find a way to treat it better.因为是讲猫,感觉用treat比较好.
As it is ,你缺了个主语.然后你想说,它是人类的好朋友呢,还是tom朋友的猫?这句不通.
之后可以说,Cats can catch rats for us.
how can you be so stupid,可以是可以,就是感觉语气重了点.
之后一句,又不是很通,你是想说,“你怕蛇吗,如果是老鹰的话,你会怎么做?
最后一句,你是想说,你会后悔吗?you will regret就可以了.
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