请英文高手修改一下以下作文明显的英文错误.Thesedays,360wereagainstothercompanyagain,therewasnosurprisethatitwasusing"SecurityIssues"again.Alotofpeoplealwaysmakejokessayingthatthemarketingstrategyof360w

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请英文高手修改一下以下作文明显的英文错误.
These days,360 were against other company again,there was no surprise that it was using "Security Issues" again.
A lot of people always make jokes saying that the marketing strategy of 360 was based on "warning":360 always alert people that your system had serious security problem or 360 saved you system again.Using these ways could let customers notice the 360 and its credit.In another hand,it always could beat other company.
I used to install 360 security guards intermittently,I was disgusted with its score system very much.If you didn't install 360 explorer or 360 antivirus,the score would be very low even you installed similar software belong to other company.I think it is not good to push customers install its software by this way.
To be honest,I use 360 explorer and 360 security guards on Android very often and think they are good software.The 360 explorer can let me load bank web even I update IE and the 360 security guards has cloud sync function which is earlier than other company.I use them because they are good software and they are really useful for me.Not because they are safer than other company.I think Zhou Hongyi could focus on the product rather than always trigger disturbance with others for getting publicity.

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这篇短文是关于360的,但里面有很多语法错误.第一个语法错误是were,因为360是一个公司,所以要用was,同时下面的360后面的动词也要改为单数.第二个语法错误,是you改为your,因为system（操作系统）为名词,名词前面用所有...