句子中的错误求帮忙纠一下把.ThatdayLondonhasaverythickfog.Icouldhardseemyhandinfrontofmyface.Carsandbusesranveryquicklywiththelightson.Wheneveningcame,itgotmoreworse.Alltrafficcametostop.SinceIhadai

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句子中的错误求帮忙纠一下把.
That day London has a very thick fog.I could hard see my hand in front of my face.Cars and buses ran very quickly with the lights on.When evening came,it got more worse.All traffic came to stop .Since I had a important meeting on the one side of the down.Idecided to walk.Minutes later I lost.Then I heard a woman speaking,”I think you are lost.Can I help you?” I was very glad to find another person in the rain.I followed her through the dark street.I asked how she found her.Way without any difficulty in so a fog.

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hard改为hardly；got改为gets；came改为comes;more worse改为much worse;another person改为a person;her改为I;亲,时态要一致!