请教一篇英语改错的文章如题.一共有10处错误.谢谢勒DearHarry,Howareyou?TodayI'vegotawonderfulnewstotellyou.IhavebeenofferedascholarshipatauniversityinAustralianformyfurthereducation.Onehundredand

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请教一篇英语改错的文章
如题.一共有10处错误. 谢谢勒
Dear Harry,
How are you ? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you.I have been offered a scholarship at a university in Australian for my further education.One hundred and twenty students take exams for it. However,my parents are not happy about it.They are strong against my going there.They think it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid I will feel alone.They advise me to study in Beijing what is the capital instead.Then I'll be able to continue living with them.How can I ask them accept the fact I have grown up?
Best wishes
Yours,
Li Mei

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Dear Harry,
How are you?Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you.I have been offered a scholarship at a university in Australian for my further education.One hundred and twenty students take exams for it.However,my parents are not happy about it.They are strong against my going there.They think it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid I will feel alone.They advise me to study in Beijing what is the capital instead.Then I'll be able to continue living with them.How can I ask them accept the fact I have grown up?
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Mei
1.不能说a news,改成 some wonderful news
2.in Australian (澳大利亚的)改成in Australia (澳大利亚)
3.take exams 改成t ook exams
4.strong against 改成 strongly against
5.too far away 改成 so far away
6.alone 改成 lonely
7-8 They advise me to study in Beijing what is the capital instead.改成 ,Instead,they advise me to study in Beijing,which is the capital.
9.living 改成 to live
10.ask them accept 改成 ask them to accept