这是整句.这句子对吗?althoughmoneyisimportantinmostpeople'slives,butthereisnothingmoreimportantthanyourparents.whatyourparentsneedissharing,caring&loving.notaboutmoney.so,pleasecherishyourparents.

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这是整句.这句子对吗?
although money is important in most people's lives, but there is nothing more important than your parents. what your parents need is sharing, caring & loving. not about money. so, please cherish your parents.

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Money is important to most people,but nothing is more important than our parents.What our parents need is no more than our sharing,care and love.Money is not that significant to them.We need to cherish our parents.
不知道你能否理解我这么改的意思.