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拜托英语大神改下文章,申请出国类的.
A difficult choice
“five,six ,seven,stop” with the music of class-to-class exercise ending, we schoolmates returned to the teaching building from the ground. I was walking upstairs on the ladder,when Beichen appeared beside.””Ha! Beichen”,I punched on his shoulder “ohh,Chen XX!”,He seemed surprised.Then we chatted about the new life in high school.He told me all things goes fine except mathematics.He found a huge barrier to math,because what this teacher teached is easy but the homework is so difficult.Then he asked if i can help him with a few questions in math: As I’m arriving my class,I say to him “I will call you after school.”
Beichen is one of the best friends of mine in middle school.Usually,we will go together after school,talking about various items ,why the electric stick is so strong and our childhood dreams. Later ,we both attend the same high school,I’m in the honorable classs while he went to middle calss.
This time he asked me for help, of course I;d like to help him immediately.;however,this issue is by no means easy. I feel that there are two little buys arguing in my heart.
One says:”you can’t go after class,because your time is so limited while you have so many to do.since you are in the best class, your as a top st should pay multiple effors than others. If you spend hours solving others’ questions,when to handle your own things? Besides,how much do you think you can help him just in few hours. Even if he make sense of these questions,latter he will have more. As a matter of fact, it’s he that can really help himself.
The other one argued:”you should go after class,definitely.He is your best friend,which means you should help each other,especially when one is in trouble.After all,true friendship is more precious than everything. In another perspective ,this is also a good chance for you to learn making good use of time .If you are more efficient.,you can make up for the lost few hours.In addition,you can have a better control of math by teaching it.He might just get stuck on the door.Advice some approaches of learning,recommend good exercise books to him.I’m sure he will soon find his way.
What a fierce argument!How hard to choose!
After school,when i called him up,saying:”i’m really busy these days,so let’s quickly go to mini library and solve your questions!”I felt happy.

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“five,six ,seven,stop” with the class-to-class exercise music ending,my schoolmates and I returned to the classrooms.I was walking up the stairs when suddenly Beichen appeared beside me.”Ha!Beichen”,I greeted him with a punch on the shoulder “ohh,Chen XX!” He seemed surprised to see me.As we walked we had a chat about our new life in high school.He told me that everything was going well except mathematics.He found math to be a huge barrier because even though what the teacher taught in class was easy,the homework is very difficult.Then he asked if i could help him with a few questions in Maths.As I arrived to my class,I said to him "i will call you after school"
Beichen is one of my best friends from middle school.Usually,we would go home together after school talking about various things such as,why the electric stick is so strong,and our childhood dreams.Later on,we both attended the same high school.I am in the honorable class while he is in the middle class.
When he asked for my help,of course I'd like to help him immediately,however this issue is by no means easy.I feel that there two little bugs were knawing at my heart.
One says "you cant go after class because your time is very limited and you have so many things to do.Since you are in the honorable class,you need to spend more effort than others,if you spend hours solving others' questions,when do you have time to handle your own things?Besides how much do you think you can help him in just a few hours/ Even if he makes sense of these questions,he will have more questions later.As a matter of fact,only he can really help himself."
The other argued " you should definately go after class.He is your best friend,which means you should help each other out,especially when one is in trouble.After all,true friendship is more precious than anything else.In another perspective this is also a good chance for you to learn making good use of time.If you are more efficient then you can make up for the few hours spent.In addition,you can have a more solid understading of math by teaching it.He might just get be stuck at the door.With some advice,different approaches to learning and recommending some good exercise books to him,I'm sure he will soon find his way."
What a fierce argument!Its so hard to choose!
After school,when I called him up saying "i'm really busy these days so let's quickly go to the mini library and solve your questions" I felt happy