一个句子能否有两个连词帮我看下这个句子对不对?如果不对该怎么改?Evenifyouarestuckinthefog,aslongasyouhaveasincereandpureheart,youwillsurelyenabletoovercomeanydifficulties.

Question

一个句子能否有两个连词
帮我看下这个句子对不对?如果不对该怎么改?
Even if you are stuck in the fog,as long as you have a sincere and pure heart,you will surely enable to overcome any difficulties.

Answer 1

这里句子本身没什么问题,就是有点主语重复,一共3段重复出现了3个主语“you”,建议中间一段改为现代分词表伴随,而不是条件,避免重复,突出所要说的重要信息.
Having a sincere and pure heart,you will surely enable to overcome any difficulties even if you are stuck in the fog.