这篇英语文章该怎么改?需要加点什么?Goodmorning/afternoon,teachers.MynameisQianLvchen.Mythesis['θi:sis]topic['tɔpik]that“Ihope”.IhopeIhopeourEarthbecameclean.Suchwordspeoplewillbreathethefreshair.Enviro

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这篇英语文章该怎么改?需要加点什么?
Good morning/afternoon,teachers.My name is QianLvchen.My thesis ['θi:sis] topic ['tɔpik] that “I hope”.
I hope
I hope our Earth became clean.Such words people will breathe the fresh air.Environment will become beautiful.Animals will live better.We will be happier.The world is like a big garden.If you want my hope is to come true,we must protect environment.What can we do?We can keep our school clean.We can reuse the shopping bags.We can do a lot of things.Perhaps less would pick up a waste pollution of an inch of land.Also many a walk.Some air pollution will be less.Let us now from the minor ['mainə] matter ['mætə],starts from the start,let us for our earth!
怎么不通？

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不通啊 不能用汉语思维啊