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More and more students attend the training classes or hire the hutors today.As many people say,training classes give the students more chances to communicate with teachers.And the students can make up for what they miss or fail to understand in clases .It's necessary for many students.
Although training classes or hutors have a lot of advantages,it have its disadvantages as well.For example,it may make the students are used to depending on the teachers.What's worse,hiring tutors or attending training classes may cause some students listen their regular classes carelessly.
In my opinion,training classes are not necessary for us.As I know,there are many people attending different kinds of training classes in my class.I think this part of student's parents give support to do that,because they think it is good for their children's study.At our school ,a large portion of teachers don't support that.Of cause ,they never forbid.There are times when we finish our study ,do any other things.So I don't agree with someone who attend training classes on weekdays.

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Nowadays more and more students attend the training classes (tutoring school 补习学校) or hire tutors.Many people think that tutoring schools give (provide) the students more chances to communicate with teachers.And the students can make up for what they miss or fail to understand in their regular schools.Many students think that such help is necessary.
Although taking tutoring classes or hiring tutors could help one in many ways,it certainly has its disadvantages.For example,the students may get used to depending on others or help.What's worse,those who study with tutors or those who attend tutoring schools might not pay attention when they go to their regular schools.
In my opinion,tutoring schools are not necessary.As far as I know,a lot of my classmates do attend different kinds of after school programs.I think it is their parents who push them to do that because they think it is to their children's best interest.In my school,most of the teachers don't agree with that,either.Of cause,they never say no.When we finish our work,we should relax and do things we like.(Just as the saying goes,” All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” 这是我加的,你可以不要) In a word,I don’t think tutoring is necessary at all.
你的文章思路很清楚.总的句子结构也不错.我把几个词改了下.
Training schools会让人以为是职业培训学校,美国对那些课后去学这学那的学校多称为tutoring school,( like tutoring schools for SAT,piano school(钢琴学校) or any other after school programs.我也同意你的观点,放学了就好好玩,打球,看电视,玩游戏等.开心!