这有个英文句子不大会写求指导However,asfarasIamconcerned,thingshavebecomedifferentwhenitcomesfromthesocietytoindividual’sdestiny.大意应该还是明确的吧,但总觉得这句子不大对,到底应该怎么表达?

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这有个英文句子不大会写求指导
However,as far as I am concerned,things have become different when it comes from the society to individual’s destiny.
大意应该还是明确的吧,但总觉得这句子不大对,到底应该怎么表达?
文章是讨论知识能否改变命运，然后我前面写知识可以改变社会，这里想转折下表示知识难以改变个人的命运

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As far as I am concerned,however,things have become different when it comes from the society to individual's destiny.
however 放在句中由前后两个逗号隔开的用法更加正式.
你是想表达社会与个人的命运截然不同吗?不如直接用thins have become different when it comes to the whole society and individual's destiny.