帮忙批改一篇英语作文.指出错误LiMing'shometownhaschangedalotinthepastfewyears.Inthepast.Theirlivingconditionswereverybad.Theylivedinasmalllowhouse.TheyhadnotTVtowatch.TheirworkingtoolswerefarmanimalsThe

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帮忙批改一篇英语作文.指出错误
Li Ming's hometown has changed a lot in the past few years.
In the past.Their living conditions were very bad.They lived in a small low house.They had not TV to watch.Their working tools were farm animals Their school conditions were bad.They studied in an old school.
But now.Their living in a tall bright building.They can play computer games and watch TV in their free times.Their working tools are farm machines.Their are studying in a modern school.
In short,along with chinese devwlopment.Their life will be more and more beautiful.

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第二行的bad用poor更好些,用bad也无语法错误
第二行had not 应为didn't have因为had not 是完成时标志,此处用法错误
第五行Their应改为They
第六行time应为单数,此处用法错误
第六行Their应改为They
第七行In short,along with chinese devwlopment.不正确,不知楼主要表达什么

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