帮忙批一篇英语作文请根据下面提示,写一篇短文.词数不少于50.礼品的名称可以使用汉语拼音.YourAustralianfriendJimhasbeeninBeijingforquiteafewdays.Heisleavingtomorrow.Youhaveboughthimagift,whichis

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帮忙批一篇英语作文
请根据下面提示,写一篇短文.词数不少于50.礼品的名称可以使用汉语拼音.
Your Australian friend Jim has been in Beijing for quite a few days.He is leaving tomorrow.You have bought him a gift, which is typical of Chinese culture.Now please tell him why you have chosen this gift, and what special cultural meaning it has.
HI, Jim, here's a gift for you._______________________________________________.
我写的
Hi, Jim, here’s a gift for you. Its name is ‘Zhongguojie’, a typical of Chinese culture. I’ve chosen the gift for you not only because it’s a symbol of our deep friendship but also want you to remember the great country and take the best wishes to Australians from our hospitable Chinese people. So don’t forget to tell your friends the ‘zhonggoujie’’s special cultural meaning. It represents union, prosperity and happiness.
15分满分,帮忙批个分,挑挑错.尤其是
I’ve chosen the gift for you not only because it’s a symbol of our deep friendship but also want you to remember the great country and take the best wishes to Australians from our hospitable Chinese people.

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Hi,Jim,here’s a gift for you.Its name is ‘Zhongguojie’,a typical( typical is adj,so it is not corect here))of Chinese culture.I’ve chosen the(i think "this" is better than the) gift for you not only because it’s a symbol of our deep friendship but also (i 在这边最好不要省略,这个句子从语法上好像没什么问题,但是感觉句子偏长,中国式英语味道太重,这也是我一家之言,我的英语很不好）want you to remember the great country and take the best wishes to Australians from our hospitable Chinese people.So don’t forget to tell your friends the ‘zhonggoujie’’s special cultural meaning.It represents union,prosperity and happiness.