高三短文改错Nowadays,TV PK Shows have attracted many young people .As for me,they have both positive effect .Therefore ,most important thing is

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高三短文改错
Nowadays,TV PK Shows have attracted many young people .As for me,they have both positive effect .Therefore ,most important thing is how we see it,Some people think the shows provided grass-root people with a stage to display their talents ,but they should catch every opportunity to show off their talents.. Some students even give in their studies to attend them in the hope of become famous overnight , But others people hold the shows may destroy young people,Once that they fail in these shows,they will suffer a great unbalancn ,This is real bad for them physically and mentally

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Nowadays,TV PK Shows have attracted many young people.As for me,they have both positive effect 【and negative effect】.Therefore,(加入the) most important thing is how we see (it改成them).Some people think the shows (provided改成provide) grass-root people with a stage to display their talents,(but改成so/and) they should catch every opportunity to show off their talents.Some students even give (in改成up) their studies to attend them in the hope of (become改成becoming) famous overnight.But (others改成other) people hold 【the view that】 the shows may destroy young people.Once (去掉that) they fail in these shows,they will suffer 【如果少打的东西没错,则此处加上from；少打的东西有错,则此处不改】 a great unbalance.This is (real改成really) bad for them physically and mentally.
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