英语作文纠错帮忙看下有无很严重的语法,用词错误Atpresent,socialpraticehasbeenplayanincreasinglyimportantroleinourcollegelife.It'snessecaryforcollegestudentstotakepartinsocialpraticeInfact,mostofcolleges

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英语作文纠错 帮忙看下有无很严重的语法,用词错误
At present,social pratice has been play an increasingly important role in our college life.It's nessecary for college students to take part in social pratice
In fact,most of college students are busy to study and pay less attention to social practice.Undoubtely,college students have benefited a lot from social experience that couldn't be learned in textbooks.In addition,college students can not only improve themselves.
In my oppion,I think it's necessary for college students to participant in social practice.The students spend lots of time in playing computer games and shopping on line nowadays.All in all,it's good for college students to take part in social practice.

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简单纠正一下语法错误,供参考
At present,social pratice has been （playing ）an increasingly important role in our college life.It's nessecary for college students to take part in social pratice
In fact,most of college students are busy（ with their study ）and pay less attention to social practice.Undoubtely,college students have benefited a lot from social experience that couldn't be learned in textbooks.In addition,college students can improve themselves.
In my oppion,I think it's necessary for college students to( be an active participant ) in social practice.The students spend lots of time in playing computer games and shopping on line nowadays.All in all,it's good for college students to take part in social practice.