英语,请校对一句话正确与否?变得更地道一些HostFamiliesinYunnanandNanjingdonotprovideshorttermhomestay（云南和南京的接待家庭不愿意提供短期Homestay）,butHostFamiliesinChengducanprovideyouthreeweek

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英语,请校对一句话正确与否?变得更地道一些
Host Families in Yunnan and Nanjing do not provide short term homestay（云南和南京的接待家庭不愿意提供短期Homestay）,but Host Families in Chengdu can provide you three weeks homestay.

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我稍微调整一下：
Host families in Yunnan province and the city of Nanjing do not provide short-term homestay.Those in the city of Chengdu,however,will be able to offer a three-week stay.