请校对英语正确与否?变得更地道一些ForyourstudyatBLCU,usuallyintensiveclasswillbefinishedat4pm,mostoftheextracurricularclassesareholdatafternoonornight.YoucanfindmuchinformationofmartialartsatBLCU,andour

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请校对英语正确与否?变得更地道一些
For your study at BLCU,usually intensive class will be finished at 4 pm,most of the extracurricular classes are hold at afternoon or night.You can find much information of martial arts at BLCU,and our Beijing staff also can help you to give you some information.For you,maybe it is a little tight to teach English for your host family one hour a day and join the extracurricular class.（对你而言,每天为接待家庭教一小时的英文,还要参加课外活动,可能太紧张了.）

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For your study at BLCU,usually intensive classes are finished at 4pm,while most of the extracurricular activities are held in the afternoon or at night.From BLCU,you will find much information of mart...