“我把贵校作为第一志愿,如果能让我合格,我非常感激”请问英文该怎么说比较地道?后一句翻译成theacceptanceofmyapplicationwouldbeappreciated怎么样?

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“我把贵校作为第一志愿,如果能让我合格,我非常感激” 请问英文该怎么说比较地道?
后一句 翻译成the acceptance of my application would be appreciated 怎么样?

Answer 1

I regard your esteemed university as my first choice.I will be very grateful if my application is accepted.
后一句如果用apprecaite可以说I will highly appreciate it if my application is accepted.