初二英语作文（急I级IIII级II急）英语作文要求：根据下面的文字提示,以“ZhangKai'shealthplan"为题目写一篇短文.张凯很挑食,基本上不吃蔬菜和水果,所以他身体一直不太好.为了改善身体状况

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初二英语作文（急I级IIII级II急）
英语作文
要求：根据下面的文字提示,以“Zhang Kai's health plan "为题目写一篇短文.
张凯很挑食,基本上不吃蔬菜和水果,所以他身体一直不太好.为了改善身体状况,他制定了一个健康计划:
1.每天喝一杯牛奶,吃两个苹果,多吃蔬菜,少吃肉和垃圾食品；
2.每天早上跑步20分钟,晚饭后散步十五分钟；
3.晚上不看太多电视,早睡觉,保证充足的睡眠；
4.感觉不舒服时,立刻看医生.
提示：at once 立刻；马上
Zhang Kai 's health plan
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Frist,I'm going to drink a cup of milk and eat two apples everyday .I'm going to eat a lot of vegetables and eat a few meet .
Then ,I'm going to run at 20 minute every morning and going for a walk at 15 minute every evening.
I'm going to watch a few TV,and go to bed early for keep a good sleep.
Then ,I 'm going to see a doctor at once when I feel bad.

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eat two apples everydayeveryday 应该是分开写的.I'm going to run at 20 minute every morning and going for a walk at 15 minute every evening.run at 20 minute不用写AT,因为这不是在一个准确的时间,所以不用A...