托福独立写作偏题了==虽然不知道是不是偏得很厉害虽然不知道是不是偏得很厉害,原题是,Nowadaysparentshavemuchlesstimetospendwithchildren.Usethetimetoplaysportsorgames,ortodothethingsthatarerelat

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托福独立写作偏题了= =虽然不知道是不是偏得很厉害
虽然不知道是不是偏得很厉害,原题是,Nowadays parents have much less time to spend with children.Use the time to play sports or games,or to do the things that are related to the schoolwork?我写成students should play sports and games in their spare time..偏题的话在综合写作不错（good）的情况下有多少分?

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偏了,题目是问parents现在是否有更少的的时间与children玩或者学校事务,所以侧重点是parents,应该写parents的时间问题（比如经常出差啊,公司事务多）.然而写students should play sports and games in their spare time.是在分析student玩的好处或坏处.
属偏题作文,分数og上说是0分,但是实际上没那么惨,应该有fair(前提是你的文笔不错).
总分就合计一下,大约22-23（综合写作good也有高低,不清楚你的good是什么样的）