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有关光污染的调查揭示了一个很令人惊讶的对人体的影响.它竟然是引起大多数青少年近视的重要原因之一  THE light pollution survey revealed a surprising effect of human .It turn out to be Adolescent myopia stems from many element,such as light pollution
2.今年的粮食产量同比去年增长了百分之25  this year's crop production year-on-year growth of 25 percent

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effect to human.对人体的影响,用to更合适.
it turn out to be one of the most important reasons to cause myopia of teenagers.
        不要用很专业很冷僻的词语.teenager 就是指的青少年.
 
2.基本上很少用year-to-year...意思是去年同期比（同比）.
        The grain output of this year has an 25% growth compared with last year.