Directions:Writeacompositionhowtofacedisasters.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.人的一生中，可能会遇到一些灾难事件，给我们的生活带来意外的打击。

Question

Directions: Write a composition how to face disasters. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1. 人的一生中，可能会遇到一些灾难事件，给我们的生活带来意外的打击。

2. 面对灾难，我们应该坚强，不要过于沉湎于悲痛，要积极面对人生。

3. 我的看法。参考词汇： 沉迷于: indulge in 意外的打击: unexpected blows

Answer 1

On Disasters

An old saying goes: Life is full of roses and thorns. As we all know one’s life is full of unexpected events some of which are wonderful and some of which are disastrous. Those heavy blows such as floods snowstorms and earthquakes can put people in sadness.

However it’s even worse if one can’t get himself out of the sadness because mental break-down is more serious than the disaster itself. Instead of indulging oneself in sadness one should take positive attitude towards life and contribute to the reconstruction of his or her life and hometown.

As for me if I am lucky enough to survive in a disaster I will try my best to help those who are suffering by donation blood or money. If I am a victim I will try to recover from the sadness as soon as possible and be certain to be strong and hopeful to the recovery work.

这是一篇观点类写作，本篇文章主要是讲在收到灾害的打击后，我们应该怎么面对生活。考生可以从灾难事件联想到自己在生活中遇到困难时，是怎么面对的这一点出发写作。注意根据题目的中文提示，按照要求写作。首先要写明题目的中文提示，还要外加自己的观点。字迹要工整，语句要流畅。
【亮点分析】本文开篇An old saying goes: Life is full of roses and thorns生活总是充满了荆棘和玫瑰，以谚语引出生活中总是会遇到灾难这一话题。接着以一个非限制性定语从句As we all know one’s life is full of unexpected events some of which are wonderful and some of which are disastrous再次强调生活中的乐与悲。非限制性定语从句的使用使文章更加丰富。文章第二段it’s even worse if one can’t get himself out of the sadness because mental break-down is more serious than the disaster itself.更是采用复杂句，这一句话使用了比较级、it作形式主语、条件状语等多种结构，足以体现考生的写作水平非同一般。one should take positive attitude towards life and contribute to the reconstruction of his or her life and hometown.使用并列谓语的结构说明对待生活的态度，更能给人以启迪。最后一段if I am lucky enough to survive in a disaster I will try my best to help those who are suffering by donation blood or money. If I am a victim I will try to recover from the sadness as soon as possible and be certain to be strong and hopeful to the recovery work.表明自己的观点，并采用两个“if I am…I wll”句型，举一正一反的假设，更能说服读者传递其正能量。此外考生还多处使用像indulging oneself in、 take positive attitude towards、contribute to、get himself out of等词的表达。总结：学会连接词的运用和表达such as 、However、As for me (注意各种从句的应用及句型的转换和变化)

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