短文改错Mymotherhasalwaysadvicedmetokeepadiary,soi'vefollowedhisadvice.Ihavebeenkeepingadiaryfromyoungageandhasmanyadvantage.Thefewminutesspentwritethediaryhashelpedmetoseetheweventsofthedayfrominad

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My mother has always adviced me to keep a diary ,so i've followed his advice .I have been keeping a diary from young age and has many advantage .The few minutes spent write the diary has helped me to see thew events of the day from in a different point of view .I felt that writing a diary is a good way to express anger .Also .i can dream of my future free.The diary will not judge me as other people ,Being able to read through how i have written help remind me of events in the past.

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My mother has always adviced me to keep a diary ,so i've followed his（改her） advice .I have been keeping a diary from （加a）young age and has many advantage（改advantages） .The few minutes spent write(改writing) the diary has helped me to（去掉to） see thew events of the day from in(去掉in） a different point of view .I felt that writing a diary is a good way to express anger .Also .i can dream of my future free（改freely）.The diary will not judge me as(改like) other people ,Being able to read through how(改what) i have written help（改helps） remind me of events in the past.