假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加

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    假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

    删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

    1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Amy

    I am writing to thank you for your congratulations at my success in the translation competition. In your letter you told me that you want to know how to do well in translation. Here are some piece of advice.

    First you need to grasp the basic grammar knowledge that enables you to understand the sentences correctly and translate the originally language to the target language properly. Second you’d better to master a wide range of knowledge belonged to different fields. It’s true that the more you know the easier is for you to make clear what the passage talks about.

    I hope my suggestions are of great helpful for your future study and translation. Don’t hesitate to contact me since you have any question.

                                                                      Yours

                                                                      Li Ming

Answer 1

 Dear Amy

I am writing to thank you for your congratulations at my success in the translation

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competition. In your letter you told me that you want to know how to do well in translation.

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Here are some piece of advice.

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First you need to grasp the basic grammar knowledge that enables you to understand

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the sentences correctly and translate the originally language to the target language properly.

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Second you’d better to master a wide range of knowledge belonged to different fields. It’s true

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that the more you know the easier∧is for you to make clear what the passage talks about.

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     I hope my suggestions are of great helpful for your future study and translation. Don’t

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hesitate to contact me since you have any question.

                 when/if                                           Yours

                                                                       Li Ming