假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一 个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) 并在其 下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写 出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

    2. 只充许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

    This afternoon I walked into a small store just for quick look. There I find a little girl holding a large colorful toy. She eager asked her father to buy it to her. However her father said no to him because he couldn’t afford it though it would cost him only 20 yuan. Disappointed although she was the girl was accepted her father's decision. When the father went to the other end of the store to look at something I asked him that I could buy the toy and give it to his daughter. He looked surprising for a few minute but eventually agreed. I did what I had promised and then left the store.

Answer 1

1. . .. for quick look.   quick 前加 a2. . .. find a little girl...   find →found3. She eager asked ...   eager→eagerly4. . .. buy it to her.   to→for5. . .. said note him ...   him→her6. Disappointed although she ...  although→ as / though7. . .. the girl was accepted ...   去掉 was8. . .. I asked him that...   that→if / whether9. He looked surprising ...   surprising→surprised   10. . .. a few minute ...   minute→minutes