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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Susan

Thank you for your letter. Due to the fact that I am on business in another city I couldn’t reply your letter directly after I received it. Now I am writing to tell you what my city has done to reduce traffic jams in the last few years.

First of all four subways and some expressways have been built in my city to ease the heavy traffic. Second public transportation has been improved to make convenient for people to take buses. However the parking fee is raised in the downtown it helps to reduce the number of cars come in and out.

Now there are more buses and few cars in my city. The traffic is flowing smooth during the rush hour.

Can you tell me everything about the traffic in your city? Expecting for your reply!

Yours

Li Hua

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Dear Susan

Thank you for your letter. Due to the fact that I am on business in another city I couldn’t

was

reply ∧your letter directly after I received it. Now I am writing to tell you what my city has done

to reduce traffic jams in the last few years.

First of all four subways and some expressways have been built in my city to ease the heavy

traffic. Second public transportation has been improved to make convenient for people to take

convenience

buses. However the parking fee is raised in the downtown it helps to reduce the number of

Besides/Furthermore/moreover/Additionally which

cars come in and out.

coming

Now there are more buses and few cars in my city. The traffic is flowing smooth during the