英语翻译在光污染环境下长期工作学习,会对人健康产生严重的威胁,其中对于眼睛造成伤害尤为令人堪忧.（汉语意思）我翻译的英文是It（it在此处指代光污染）willbringaseriousthreattohumanh

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英语翻译
在光污染环境下长期工作学习,会对人健康产生严重的威胁,其中对于眼睛造成伤害尤为令人堪忧.
（汉语意思）
我翻译的英文是
It （it在此处指代光污染）will bring a serious threat to human health when working and studying in the light pollution for a long time.Light pollution worried people most is the damage to the eyes.
我觉得这段英文生硬或者有语法错误,

Answer 1

你好这位朋友,我觉得你翻译得已经不错啦,特别是第一句开头的用词,蛮到位的嗯!
改错和修改成地道英文之后如下：
It poses a serious threat on human health after long-term work and study in an environment adversely affected by light pollution. Among all the negative effects associated with light pollution, its potential harm to human eyes and vision is of particular concern.
绝对语法正确+地道英文,有不懂的你就说哈,我给你解释~
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