几道英语问题①.在某人的职业生涯中是inone'scareer吗?in可不可以换成during?②.Weshouldfollowherexampleandengageinourjobs,notfocusonfameandwealth.这句话中到底是用focus还是用focusing呢?麻烦讲解一

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几道英语问题
①.在某人的职业生涯中是in one's career吗?in可不可以换成during?
②.We should follow her example and engage in our jobs,not focus on fame and wealth.这句话中到底是用focus还是用focusing呢?麻烦讲解一下这里涉及到的语法知识.
③.the shaping factors for her achievements这里的介词用for对不对?
④.After graduating from Laiyang Agricultural College,he has developed more than thirty kinds of fine corn seeds in the past thirty years,created a wonder of high output of corn in China.这里的create是不是用一般过去式?如果不是,要怎么改呢?麻烦讲解一下这里涉及到的语法知识.
⑤.In 2002 she was awarded the honorary doctorate of Princeton University and her personal wealth has reached up to $1 billion,becoming the first black billonaire in America.这是范文的一句话,我总觉得有点问题,我觉得那个becoming the first black billonaire in America这样用就是修饰她的财富了,而不是修饰她本人,所以好像有点不对劲.那么这句话到底对不对呢?
⑥.She was born on January 29th,1954.日子后面要不要加th或者st啊?（我习惯加上,可是很多书上都不加的.）

Answer 1

是,一般不用during
focus,因为这里的focus还是跟在should后面的
建议在此使用从句 factors that shape her achievements(多嘴一句,看意思我猜会不会是factors that contribute to her achievement)
建议加and 后带has created 强调他已经做了
把这个becoming 看做是最前面那个she作主语的句子的从句就行了
不加为宜