englishhelp?非常感谢你愿把我们工厂介绍到你们公司,附件是我司的资料,请查阅,如有任何疑问,请随时联系我们.Thanksforyougladintroduceourfactorytoyoucompany,Attachentisourfactorydataforyoureview.Ify

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english help?
非常感谢你愿把我们工厂介绍到你们公司,附件是我司的资料,请查阅,如有任何疑问,请随时联系我们.
Thanks for you glad introduce our factory to you company,Attachent is our factory data for you review.If you have any question,Pls feel free contact us.看看我段有没什麼语法或表达不对的地方.

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你的不是you,是your,还有些错误,feel free to do 不是do
If you have any question,在商务英语中一般前句用虚拟语气更委婉
还是看我的如下翻译吧：
Thanks for your kindness (或：willingness）of introducing our factory to your company. Attached is the profile of our factory for your review（或：reference）. （公司的资料用profile,简单情况介绍更好） Should you have any questions, pls feel free to contact us.