英语作文修改,请快一点!Ioftengetupatseveno`clock.ThenIbrushmyteethandwashmyfaceattenpastseven.Ieatmybreakfastattwentypastseven.Igotoschoolwithmymotherathalfpastseven.Igoh

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英语作文修改,请快一点!
I often get up at seven o`clock.Then I brush my teeth and wash my face at ten past seven.I eat my breakfast at twenty past seven.I go to school with my mother at half past seven.I go home at half past four.I `m hungry,so I eat some cake.I do my homework at five o`clock.At seven o`clock I eat dinner with my mother.The foods are very delicious!Then I play computer.I go to bed at nine o`clock.What a busy day!
请帮我指出问题,并修改,谢谢,请快一点!

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so I eat some cakes 蛋糕是可数的
The food is very delicious food 是不可数的,所以用is
其他就没有错了,What a busy day!是对的