我有三篇英文文章,进行网申用的,但是一直提交不了,要求包括字母空格一共100字的空格,不能有语法拼写错MaybethisisnotthemostoutstandingachievementIhavemade,I'mproudtosay,it'smymostmeaningfulachieve

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我有三篇英文文章,进行网申用的,但是一直提交不了,要求包括字母空格一共100字的空格,不能有语法拼写错
Maybe this is not the most outstanding achievement I have made,I'm proud to say,it's my most meaningful achievement .In 2008,I took my college entrance examination,unfortunately,I failed.This result frightened me.Because before this,I have not received any sort of strict sense of frustration.For a moment I can not receive so serious failure.To go to a university unwillingly or to try again,I fell into a dilemma situation.After all,it was a bit like gambling,nobody can guarantee.
My parents and I discussed next,draw the conclusion:let's try again.In June 2009,7,I took my second university entrance exam .God in the clouds blinked once ,my June,in the dark clouds.No matter how to say,I made more progress than the previous year,to some extent.My father endured sadness,and talked to me :stay,there is hope,go,out of your own way.Finally,I entered the university now ,frankly speaking,it's not a very good university.
In many people's eyes,this is not the fantastic achievement,even that it is defeat.To me,I cherish it.We know,accepting one's success is easy,but facing the failure and accepting it,whic seem a little bit difficult.However,I do,and maybe ,in this process,my performance was not very calm.But,the experience strengthened my frustration endurance,strengthened my heart construction.I regard this achievement as my mature symbol,the more I know,I'm an adult,not a 18-year-old girl,so,I want to have more responsibility,be responsible for myself and my own choice .This conviction,spent two years with the university life,makes me a half in college students play the role of social people good.Of course,things don't smooth but,as the earth turns all the time.I believe no one would have been stopped at the trough.A sentence says so,after black clouds,clear weather,one day ,he wonld reach peaks.The world is a good place and worth fighting for.急,指错.

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Maybe this is not the most outstanding achievement I have made,I'm proud to say,it's my most meaningful achievement .In 2008,I took my college entrance examination,unfortunately,I failed.This result frightened me.Because before this,I have not received any sort of strict sense of frustration.For a moment I can not receive such serious failure.To go to a university unwillingly or to try again,I fell into a dilemma situation.After all,it was a bit like gambling,nobody can guarantee.