给一段英文纠错改进ThosedaysIwatchthefilm'LegendsOfTheFall'.Itwasaromanticstorythroughaman'slife,whichrelatedtolove,family,dreamandself-searching.DuringtheChinesestyleeducationamongmylife,Ididn'tevenknowhowim

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给一段英文纠错改进
Those days I watch the film 'Legends Of The Fall'.It was a romantic story through a man's life,which related to love,family,dream and self-searching.During the Chinese style education among my life,I didn't even know how important to listen to the voice from my heart.The film shocked me and watched me.

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The film shocked me and watched me.【watched---touched】
During the Chinese style education among my life,I didn't even know how important to listen to the voice from my heart.【among--in; how important is it to listen.;】
Those days I watch the film 'Legends Of The Fall'.【watched 用过去时态】
It was a romantic story 【was---is 电影的内容不会再改变.】