帮我的英语作文纠纠错：HowtobeahappykidGoodmorningeverybody,I’mNick.I'mverygladtomakeaspeechhere.Todaymytopicis"Howtobeahappykid".Manykidsareunhappyintheirstudyandlife,becausetheyhavetoomuchheavypres

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帮我的英语作文纠纠错：How to be a happy kid
Good morning everybody,I’m Nick .I'm very glad to make a speech here.Today my topic is "How to be a happy kid".
Many kids are unhappy in their study and life,because they have too much heavy pressure .But I'm a happy kid.Tell you what,in fact ,you can still be happy when there are not many "good"things.
Don't think too much about the marks.If you study hard,you can get high marks.So don't think about the marks,just be a happy kid.Don't be angry about the little things.Try to relax your self and do sth you like.
In life,you can help others.When others says"Thank you",you will be happy.It is said that "Give others the rose ,the odd incense of hand" is china .If you do a prank,you will have only one happiness.But if you help others,you will have double happiness.If you feel for others,you will have many friends and be happy.Sometimes you should open your heart wide,and welcome others into your heart.Finally,you will know have many friends,are very happy and excited.
Kids ,hope you all a happy kid.
Thank you for your listening!

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P1:Tell you what
what不需要
P2：Try to relax your self
yourself连在一起
P3：Give others the rose ,the odd incense of hand" is china
P4：you will know have many friends,are very happy and excited
you will know that having many friends is very happy and excited
P5：If you feel for others
如果你想表达考虑着想的意思,think of 似乎比较好.
以上是我所发现的有关问题,仅个人意见.