一分钟英语演讲稿我的偶像题目是我的偶像!要很快!一分钟以内的,不要太长,EXO-K的朴灿烈.我自己写完了,那就帮忙检查一下有没有错吧……Helloeveryone,mynameisviolet,todayIwanttotellyouaboutmy

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一分钟英语演讲稿 我的偶像
题目是我的偶像!
要很快!一分钟以内的,不要太长,
EXO-K的朴灿烈.
我自己写完了,那就帮忙检查一下有没有错吧……
Hello everyone,my name is violet,today I want to tell you about my idol.
My idol is Park Chan yeol from EXO.
His voice was very low,and his cute appearance does not match with.
He is from Korea,so his Chinese isn't very good.
His specialty is the RAP,dancing,and singing.
He is loved and other members slapstick,so often a frown.
His teeth are very white,so he was very like his teeth shine.
This is my idol,you have your own idol?
On these,thank you.

Answer 1

孩子,voice is low ,你用was是几个意思?
你做演讲的话,不如,把so his Chinese isn't very good.改为 be good at的形式,he is not
good at chinese.'
He is loved and other members slapstick,so often a frown-----这句你是要表达这个意思?-----.他爱和其他成员闹剧,所以经常皱起眉头.
孩子,你是有道出来的吗