下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改

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下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起) 不计分。
As is known to all that our students of today have to fix our attention on our lessons, so we know few of society. A holiday is the best time and the best chance to make up for that. Take a part-time job is a good form of social practice. That we have learned in books and in class can’t have same important effect on us as what we have learned through personal practice. In social practice, we can surely make a progress in both knowledge or practical ability. Beside, when we take a part-time job, we may got paid more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say a senior school student should take a part-time job in their holidays, if possible. 

Answer 1

It is known to all that we students of today have to fix our attention on our lessons, so we know little of society. A holiday is the best time and the best chance to make up for that. Taking a part-time job is a good form of social practice. What we have learned in books and in class can’t have the same important effect on us as what we have learned through personal practice. In social practice, we can surely make 去掉 a  progress in both knowledge and practical ability. Besides , when we take a part-time job, we may get paid more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say a senior school student should take a part-time job in their holidays, if possible.

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